Two Years Reviews

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Z

Chapter: 1
Rating:
Good Start - A great start for your fic! Really liked the ending.

DDM

Chapter: 1
Rating:
:( - Poor Misora.. POOR LUNA! Augh you've got me torn between the two. :(

Anonymous

Chapter: 1
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Captain Deadpool

Chapter: 1
Rating:
Very Nice. - A good start, but you need to break up your paragraphs a bit, especially for dialogue. Makes it easier to read.

Z

Chapter: 2
Rating:
Very good. I thought the way you did the notes was a little... off, but that's not a big deal. Everything else was great, you really seem to have Luna's personality down.

Anonymous

Chapter: 2
Rating:
Can you hear it? - I could practically hear her heart break. Good stuff!

Captain Deadpool

Chapter: 3
Rating:
This started off a bit on the rocky side, but it finished nicely.

Captain Deadpool

Chapter: 4
Rating:
So-So - It isn't about the quality, but this is obviously a trasitionary kind of chapter, so there's not much to comment on.

Captain Deadpool

Chapter: 5
Rating:
Feel Good. - Don't know what it is, but the next few chapters make me feel good for some reason.

Captain Deadpool

Chapter: 6
Rating:
Sly - That Luna's a sly one...

Anonymous

Chapter: 6
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Anonymous

Chapter: 7
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Captain Deadpool

Chapter: 7
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anon

Chapter: 8
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Captain Deadpool

Chapter: 8
Rating:
Fight Fight Fight! - Your first fight scene (to my knowledge) and you pulled it off well.

anon

Chapter: 9
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Anonymous

Chapter: 12
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ZC

Chapter: All
Rating:
Great story. My favorite parts were probably the arguments between Luna and WarRock. Some of the chapters seemed a bit long to me, but that's more just my tastes.